Pomoc engleski

#1 02.11.2010. u 20:36

Treba mi neko sa dosta dobrim poznavanjem engleskom ko ce mi prevesti jedan tekst na engleski. Naravno mozete vrsiti neke izmjene u tekstu sve dok to ne izadje iz konteksta. Potrebno mi je najkasnije do sutra u 11h prijepodne

Procitao sam vas oglas za profesora istorije na sajtu vase skole i zelim da konkurisem. Uz prijavu prilazem moj CV kako ste naveli u zahtjevu. Mislim da sam prava osoba za taj posao iz nekoliko razloga koje cu u daljem tekstu navesti.

Zavrsio sam istoriju na filozofskom fakultetu u Banja Luci 2005. godine i radio sam u jednoj gimnaziji u mom gradu u periodu od 2006 - 2009. godine.

Istorija je moja velika ljubav. Smatram je jako zanimljivom i poucnom naukom. Zavolio sam je jos u djetinjstvu kroz razne price. Vec uosnovnoj skoli istorija mi je bila najdrazi predmet i znao da cu svoje skolovanje usmjeriti u pravcu istorije.

Mislim da istorija kao nauka krije mnoge odgovore koji su bitini za nas i opstanak svijeta.

Osim toga mnogo volim rad sa djecom i uopste pedagoski rad. Zelim da svoja stecena znanja podjelim sa drugima te da ukazem na neka desavanja i procese koji su se desavala mnogo godina prije nas.

Ocekujem da cete moj zahtjev razmotriti i nadam se na njega pozitivno odgovoriti, a vas odgovor mozete poslai na moju e-mail adresu.

#2 02.11.2010. u 20:44

ja !! daj text

#3 02.11.2010. u 20:45 Rješenje

imas me na msn-u
ismet_fatihcanca.....

engleski na profesionalnom nivou. Idem po Cambridge-ovom programu.

#4 02.11.2010. u 20:45

SEN1337 je napisao/la:

ja !! daj text

jel samo ovo ovdje _??

#5 02.11.2010. u 20:47

Evo ja cu ti to napravit nije prob.

Kontakt:

[email uklonjen]

#6 02.11.2010. u 20:47

SEN1337 je napisao/la:

ja !! daj text

Pa imas u temi 

procitao sam vas oglas za prof..
ako te zbunilo mozda prvo sam napisao sa engleskom a treba NA engleski

#7 02.11.2010. u 20:48

I read your ad for a professor of history at your school site and want to compete. With the application approached my CV that you specify in the request. I think I'm the right person for the job for several reasons which will hereinafter stated. I graduated from the history of the Faculty of Philosophy in Banja Luka 2005th year and I worked in a school in my town in the period 2006 - 2009. year. History is my great love. I think it is very interesting and informative science. I loved it in childhood through the various stories. Already in elementary school, history was my favorite subject and I knew that my education directed toward history. I think that history as a science hold many answers for us and survival of the world. Also I like working with children and the general educational work. I want to share their acquired knowledge ,sharing with others and to point to some events and processes that occurred many years ago. I expect that you will consider my request and I hope to respond positively to it, and you can send the reply to my e-mail address .

#8 02.11.2010. u 20:59

OverAndOut je napisao/la:

I read your ad for a professor of history at your school site and want to compete. With the application approached my CV that you specify in the request. I think I'm the right person for the job for several reasons which will hereinafter stated. I graduated from the history of the Faculty of Philosophy in Banja Luka 2005th year and I worked in a school in my town in the period 2006 - 2009. year. History is my great love. I think it is very interesting and informative science. I loved it in childhood through the various stories. Already in elementary school, history was my favorite subject and I knew that my education directed toward history. I think that history as a science hold many answers for us and survival of the world. Also I like working with children and the general educational work. I want to share their acquired knowledge ,sharing with others and to point to some events and processes that occurred many years ago. I expect that you will consider my request and I hope to respond positively to it, and you can send the reply to my e-mail address .

kopirano sa google translatea,puno grešaka

#9 02.11.2010. u 21:03

THE_BEST je napisao/la:

kopirano sa google translatea,puno grešaka

Kopirano,NIJE.Znam jako dobro engleski,i priznajem da sam koristio translate ali samo kod pojedinih riječi.A umjesto da ti tražiš greške zažto ne probaš sam prevesti,pa neka ti netko ispravlja.

#10 02.11.2010. u 21:08

Daj meni buraz sve ti uradim ioanko mi je dosadno....:D posalji mi na PM tekst uradim ti no translate 

#11 02.11.2010. u 21:10

IFC je napisao/la:

imas me na msn-u
ismet_fatihcanca.....

engleski na profesionalnom nivou. Idem po Cambridge-ovom programu.

gdje si englez HAHAHAHAHHAHA 

#12 02.11.2010. u 21:19

Nemam uistinu vremena da ti prevodim , ali cu ti ukazati na nekolicinu manjih greski koje sam pronasao citajuci , koje bi mogle poboljsati tvoju kandidaturu.


Procitao sam vas oglas za profesora istorije na WEB(pise se uvijek websajtu)sajtu vase skole i zelim da konkurisem. Uz prijavu prilazem moj CV kako ste naveli u zahtjevu. Mislim da sam prava osoba za taj posao iz nekoliko razloga koje cu navesti u nastavku teksta.(Mala izmjena redoslijeda)

Zavrsio sam istoriju na filozofskom fakultetu u Banjoj Luci(Banja Luci -> Banjoj Luci) 2005. godine i radio (sam ti je suvisno) u jednoj gimnaziji u mom gradu u periodu od 2006. - 2009. godine.

Istorija mi je (zamjena rijeci) velika ljubav. Smatram je jako zanimljivom i poucnom naukom. Zavolio sam je jos u djetinjstvu kroz razne price. Vec u osnovnoj skoli istorija mi je bila najdrazi predmet i znao da cu svoje skolovanje usmjeriti u pravcu iste. (Previse ponavljas istu rijec)

Mislim da istorija kao nauka krije mnoge odgovore koji su bitni za nas i opstanak svijeta.

Osim toga mnogo volim rad sa djecom i uopste pedagoski rad. Zelim da svoje steceno znanje podijelim(nemozes podijeliti znanja , kada imas samo jedno znanje) sa drugima te da ukazem na neka desavanja i procese koji su se desavala mnogo godina prije nas.

Unaprijed se nadam(ocekujem) da cete moj zahtjev razmotriti i nadam se na njega pozitivno odgovoriti, a vas odgovor mozete poslati na moju e-mail adresu.


Nisu velike greske , ali prilikom pisanja pisma koje je kao zahtjev/molba treba se koristiti iskljucivo zamjenicama kao da nekoga persiras , nevazno kome pises.

#13 02.11.2010. u 21:19

I read your add for a professor of history at your school site and I want to apply.
With the application I attach my CV that you specified in the request.
I think I'm the right person for the job for several reasons.

I graduated the history in the Faculty of Philosophy in Banja Luka
2005. and I worked in Gymnasium from 2006 - 2009.

History is my great love. I consider it very interesting and informative. I became fond of it since my childhood.

In elementary school already history was my favorite subject and I knew my studies will develop in that direction.

I think that the history holds many answers that are important to us and the world.

Besides I like working with children and the general educational work.
I want to share my knowledge with others and to point to some events and processes that happend many years ago.

I expect that you will consider my request and I hopefully respond affirmatively on it. Please send your reply to my e-mail address.

#14 02.11.2010. u 21:23

OverAndOut je napisao/la:

I read your ad for a professor of history at your school site and want to compete. With the application approached my CV that you specify in the request. I think I'm the right person for the job for several reasons which will hereinafter stated. I graduated from the history of the Faculty of Philosophy in Banja Luka 2005th year and I worked in a school in my town in the period 2006 - 2009. year. History is my great love. I think it is very interesting and informative science. I loved it in childhood through the various stories. Already in elementary school, history was my favorite subject and I knew that my education directed toward history. I think that history as a science hold many answers for us and survival of the world. Also I like working with children and the general educational work. I want to share their acquired knowledge ,sharing with others and to point to some events and processes that occurred many years ago. I expect that you will consider my request and I hope to respond positively to it, and you can send the reply to my e-mail address .

Da ti ja predajem eng. ja bih se upisao od smijeha

#15 02.11.2010. u 21:29

mrxilix je napisao/la:

Kopirano,NIJE.Znam jako dobro engleski,i priznajem da sam koristio translate ali samo kod pojedinih riječi.A umjesto da ti tražiš greške zažto ne probaš sam prevesti,pa neka ti netko ispravlja.

meni se čini da si ti koristio translate a da si izmjenio samo pojedine riječi.
da ja prevodim ne bi mi imao šta ispraviti ali neka,lakše napasti drugoga nego priznati da koristiš google translate

#16 02.11.2010. u 21:29

I've read Your ad for history professor on website of Your school and I want to compete(apply). I attach, with the application, my CV as You stated in demand(request). I think that I'm the right person for this job because of several reasons which I will mention below.

I finished history(graduated) on Faculty of Philosophy in Banja Luka 2005 and I worked in one high school in my town since 2006 until last year.

History is my big love. I think that history is very interesting and informative science. I fell in love with her since I was a kid thourgh different stories. Starting in elementary school, history was my favourite subject and I knew that my schooling would be in the way of history.

I think that history, like science, hides many answers that are important for us and safety of the world.

Beside that, I really like working with children and generaly Educational work. I want to share my knowledge with others and point to some events and processes which hapened many years before us.

I expect that You will consider my application and answer positively. You can send your answer on my e-mail address.

#17 02.11.2010. u 21:33

I have read your advertisement on your School website for professor of history and i want to compete.With application i approach my CV that you specify.I think i am right person for that job for several reasons which i will cite in text.
I graduated history on Faculty of Philosophy in Banja Luka 2005th and i worked in local gymnasium in period of 2006-2009.History is my great passion and i consider it very interesting and instructive sience.I became fond of it since my childhood.In elementary school already history was my favorite subject and I knew my studies will develop in that direction.

Neam vremena za vise veceras,ako je OK posalji PM pa cemo se dogovorit

#18 02.11.2010. u 21:43

IFC je napisao/la:

imas me na msn-u
ismet_fatihcanca.....

engleski na profesionalnom nivou. Idem po Cambridge-ovom programu.

Ides ti po ku**u mom, jel to ono kad si me molio da posaljem fake mail da si polozio ispit'?  HAHAHAHAHA FAIL

#19 02.11.2010. u 21:45

Gleaj ti engleza 

A kad pošalju vijest sav se preznojim kako je napisana 

#20 02.11.2010. u 21:53

Ovako neki genijalci koji tzv. ispravljaju,...ako ne želite prevesti text na svoj način,onda ne spamajte i ne komentirajte druge prevode.

#21 02.11.2010. u 22:00

Evo poslao sam i na PM . a evo i ovdje : I read your proposition concerning the job of History teacher on the website of your school and I would like to apply. You will find out my CV attached to my application form, as you required. I believe I have the enthusiasm that you are looking for:

I graduated in History at the Faculty of Philosophy of Banja Luka in 2005 and I worked in a school where I am living between 2006 and 2009.

History is one of my favourite subjects. I think it is a very interesting and instructive science. I have been dedicating to it since my childhood through various readings. I was convinced that I will be naturally attracted in learning History as I was keen on it at primary school. I do think that History can bring us some answers quite important and can help us to think differently.

Besides, I really appreciate working with children and generally being committed in the educational field. I would like to share with others the acknowledge I gained and emphasize on some events which occurred many years ago.

Thank you for sharing your time and taking into consideration my application. At your convenience, I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss the position with you. I look forward to hearing from you and writing me back on my email.

Sincerely yours,

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