Pomoc engleski

Treba mi neko sa dosta dobrim poznavanjem engleskom ko ce mi prevesti jedan tekst na engleski. Naravno mozete vrsiti neke izmjene u tekstu sve dok to ne izadje iz konteksta. Potrebno mi je najkasnije do sutra u 11h prijepodne

Procitao sam vas oglas za profesora istorije na sajtu vase skole i zelim da konkurisem. Uz prijavu prilazem moj CV kako ste naveli u zahtjevu. Mislim da sam prava osoba za taj posao iz nekoliko razloga koje cu u daljem tekstu navesti.

Zavrsio sam istoriju na filozofskom fakultetu u Banja Luci 2005. godine i radio sam u jednoj gimnaziji u mom gradu u periodu od 2006 - 2009. godine.

Istorija je moja velika ljubav. Smatram je jako zanimljivom i poucnom naukom. Zavolio sam je jos u djetinjstvu kroz razne price. Vec uosnovnoj skoli istorija mi je bila najdrazi predmet i znao da cu svoje skolovanje usmjeriti u pravcu istorije.

Mislim da istorija kao nauka krije mnoge odgovore koji su bitini za nas i opstanak svijeta.

Osim toga mnogo volim rad sa djecom i uopste pedagoski rad. Zelim da svoja stecena znanja podjelim sa drugima te da ukazem na neka desavanja i procese koji su se desavala mnogo godina prije nas.

Ocekujem da cete moj zahtjev razmotriti i nadam se na njega pozitivno odgovoriti, a vas odgovor mozete poslai na moju e-mail adresu.

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Inace sam cesto u Londonu. Ovo ti je najbolje ponudjen odgovor od svih, nemam vremena sastavio bi ti ja bolju aplikaciju, CV cijeli mislim. Ali sam u poslu nekom drugom. Ugl ovaj ti je gramaticki fino napisao i nije bazinalno, vec je koristio i fraze koje se inace u zivotu engleza koriste sto je jako bitno za kandidature ovog tipa. Ako ti je hica i zuris sa tim ovaj text uzmi i daj momku bodove fino je napisao 

sretno

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b1g #1, ostali ste failovali zhestoko :]..

Pa ne kontam zasto konkurises na posao na kojem je potreban engleski? Jer cim je potreban CV na engleskom logicno je da je potrebno i poznavanje tog jezika...

I readed yours add for the profesor of the history on the web site of your school and I want to aplly. You will find out my CV attached to my application form, as you required. I and belive that im the rihgt person for that job.

I graduated History at University of Philosophy of Banja Luka in 2005 an I worked in a school in my town betwen 2009 and 2009.

History is my big love. I think that history is very interesting and very instructive science. I was always instresting for history throw my childhood so I dreamed that i study history and i have finished
studyes.

Besides, I love working with childrens and genarally being in the field of education. So I want to share my knowledge with others and to decree on the some events and proces which hapend some years ago.

I aspect that your a going consider my aplly, and respond positively, your answer you can send me to my e-mail.

I da Sniper Dobi bodove hahahaahhahahahahha

koji FAIL Levati namazani

ja ba nmv......   

/fail

u prvom pasusu sam nasao 4 greske.

za tebe heatona evo dokaz 

To whom it may concern,

I read your advertisement about the professor in your school, and I would like to compete. As my application I approach my CV as you specified. I am sure that I am the write person for that job due to reasons that I will state in the rest of the text.

I finished History on Faculty of Philosophy in Banja Luka 2005. Year and till now I worked in one gymnasium in my city for 2006-2009. As that, I have work experience and that will help me more in the role of professor.

History is my big passion, and as a child I started to love history threw different stories. I state that it is a very interesting and instructive science. Already in Primary school, History was my favorite subject, and even then I knew that I will direct my knowledge in that direction.

I think that History as a science reveals many secrets that are important for us and the survival of the world.

Except that, I love working with child, and my previous work approved that I am capable to handle that pressure. My aim is that the knowledge that I own pass on others, younger generations, and teach them about facts, discoveries and processes that happened long time ago.

As working in before, I learned many things, not only how to be better, but how to teach better, and how to make children understand History as a good and teach full subject, making them their lessons interesting and joyful.

I expect that you will at least consider my application, and I hope that you will give me a green light. For further details you can contact me on my e-mail.

Objasnio sam ovom preko poruke
dobio sam 19x bolji prevod na jednom drugom forumu, ali sam uzeo od snipera zato sto mi se cinio nekako najvise 'skolski'