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Da ti kažem nešto..

Nemoj stavljat deset hiljada nekakvih strofa, stavi dvije-tri + refren, ne treba ti više sa više strofa pjesma će ti ličit' na one pop/r'n'b pjesme što slušaju 12-godišnje curice. (a po navedenim artistima pretpostavljam da hoćeš napravit' pjesmu elektronskog žanra)

Ono što hoću da kažem je lakše pokazat nego objasnit', pa zato, Tita ti, preslušaj ovu pjesmu i vidi lyrics.. Prelijep primjer kako možeš sa 2 strofe+refren napravit odličnu pjesmu

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Normal girl

shy girl, wont show her face
sexy girl, dressed in lace
sad girl, she'll blow her sorrow
atractive girl, the guys will follow
bully girl, she is a sin
weak girl, she will not Win
lonely girl, all on her own
chatty girl, on the phone
suicide girl, she wont be here tomorrow
emo girl, with a heart thats hollow
scared girl, no Where to hide
naughty girl, the one that lied
adventurous girl, who's out and about
victim girl, who wont go out
phsyco girl, she fell off the swing
slutty girl, who had the one night fling
depressed girl, so empty inside
lazy girl, the one that sighed
normal girl, maybe tomorrow
think, I will follow ..

- Lomi ga u kukovima bejbe ^^

When I see your smile,
My day is again, so nice,
When I look at your eyes,
I could freeze and get over that,

And I know, that there's something strage,
And I know, that I'm fall, deep in loveee

(ref)

When I look at your eyes,
When I sense you near,
When I try to tell what I feel,
I get freezed and noneone on this world,
Can explain what I feel in moments of weaknes...

It's hard to remember the day,
When I was happy just for me,
It's to realize,
That I not the only one ...

And I know, no mather what I won't stop love,
And I know, that I'll always remember your name

(ref)

When I look at your eyes,
When I sense you near,
When I try to tell what I feel,
I get freezed and noneone on this world,
Can explain what I feel in moments of weaknes...

....

And yes, I still feel something inside me,
And yes, I'm deep in love with youuuu

(ref)

When I look at your eyes,
When I sense you near,
When I try to tell what I feel,
I get freezed and noneone on this world,
Can explain what I feel in moments of weaknes...

Nije 3-4 strofe, ali većinom se dosta stvari ponavlja tako da nije teško ^^
Ako te zanima kako ide ritam (ako ga eventualno ne možeš stvoriti), javi mi se na pm.

sta ces ti nekome reci? Napacenko mali, nemas ko crv a nekome ti nesto pametujes.. Pogledaj se u ogledalo pa nekome nesto pricaj ...